1) Alfred Dwayne Brown was convicted for the crime of murdering and capable of brazen.
2) During closing arguing his conviction was announced
Wednesday, November 18, 2015
Monday, November 16, 2015
Monday, November 9, 2015
Bring home the bacon or not
1) Eating stuff like hot dogs, bacon, and other red meats of that sort is called to be the cause and put you at high risks of colon cancer.
2)People feel as nobody should have the absolute fear that they cannot consume red meat at all. They just dont eat as much because it is really un healthy for you. It is not as bad as smoking or drinking but it is still dangerous like doing the two.
3) Like said in the last question they dont want people t feel as though they can not eat red meat at all they just need to take it easy and not eat too much.
4) It is good to take it easy but do not play with anyone's food!!
5) It makes since, be cautious of how much you comsume but too many reminders can be super annoying.
6) I dont typically eat all lot of it maybe like once a month. I know what is good for my body and whats not so, think im good.
2)People feel as nobody should have the absolute fear that they cannot consume red meat at all. They just dont eat as much because it is really un healthy for you. It is not as bad as smoking or drinking but it is still dangerous like doing the two.
3) Like said in the last question they dont want people t feel as though they can not eat red meat at all they just need to take it easy and not eat too much.
4) It is good to take it easy but do not play with anyone's food!!
5) It makes since, be cautious of how much you comsume but too many reminders can be super annoying.
6) I dont typically eat all lot of it maybe like once a month. I know what is good for my body and whats not so, think im good.
Sunday, November 8, 2015
News Story Finished
New Teachers
New teachers have been brought here to campus. Students have taken a high interest in their new teachers. Senior Ezra Hankin has teacher Mr Myers, a new english teacher. "I think that Mr. Myers is a great fit for McCallum because he is able to talk to people on their individual level, and he is very humble." Hankin said. Students Miranda Vandenberg, junior, and Eesha Shoaib, freshman, have choir teacher Mr. Nelson. Mr. Nelson, is a rather new teacher who was here two years ago and left, but is back for more. "My Favorite thing about Mr. Nelson is his understanding that we have lives." Vandenberg jokes. Vandenberg also ads, " Mr. Nelson is a good teacher because he is good at pushing his students without crushing them with requirements."
" My teacher has helped me advance in this subject by teaching all the material slow, making sure we know what's happening." Shoaib said. She continued by saying," Mr Nelson, is a good fit for McCallum because he is super chilled like the rest of the faculty."
Although they're new teachers joined on campus, all of the old teachers help make them feel welcomed. To gather more information on the McCallum faculty, visit the MAC website.
Tuesday, November 3, 2015
Attribution Worksheet
1) A reporter should attribute the details at the end of the first sentence.
2) The general rule cant be applied without exception if there is a second quote in the second sentence.
3)I think attribution occurs a lot in a news story because you have to put them everywhere after there is a quote, and we tend to have lots of quotes.
4) An attribution is often found at the beginning towards the end of the story and end of the sentence.
5) As many as needed can be quoted in a story, because everyone needs to be included and you need to know who said what.
6) When starting a new paragraph a reporter should not start the paragraph when asked, because we already know you asked them a question you don't need to tell us again.
7) An attributions should start at the beginning of the sentence when you want to start with person said instead of said person.
8) An attribution should start at the end of the sentence when you want to end with said person not person said.
9) An attribution should appear in the middle of a sentence when you want to combine two different quotes from the same person.
10) You should you use tone words for verbs for an attribution in a news story.
11) The tense you should have in your attribution depends on what the interviewer says his or her quotes, how they feel.
12) Speakers should be identified on first reference with both first and last name.
13) Speakers should be identified on second reference by just there last name.
14) The rules for comma and period placement at the end of a direct quotation are that periods should be inside quotation.
15) The difference between a direct and indirect quote is that a direct quote has there quote word for word while an indirect quot has there quote paraphrased,
16) In an attribution tag the speaker comes first then the attribution word.
17) It is appropriate to put the attribution word before the speaker when all of this happens before the quote, not after.
18) " I'm proud of each and every person on this team." Said Coach Ed Hullender.
19) Junior Laura Duke, the only Wheeler High student to audition who is not currently on the dance team said, "Dancing in the Super Bowl will be a once in a lifetime opportunity."
20) Coach Steve Lattizori said," They're not real wrestlers, and i think it actually hurts the sport. I wish they would change there names from wrestling to acting."
21) Correct.
22) In correct because the attribution should have gone in front of the quote.
23) In correct because the attribution should have been in front of the quote that was given.
24) Correct.
25) In correct there should have been a period instead of a comma in the end quotation before the attribution.
26) In correct because there should have not been a coma after the quotation marks instead there should have been a period in the quotation marks.
2) The general rule cant be applied without exception if there is a second quote in the second sentence.
3)I think attribution occurs a lot in a news story because you have to put them everywhere after there is a quote, and we tend to have lots of quotes.
4) An attribution is often found at the beginning towards the end of the story and end of the sentence.
5) As many as needed can be quoted in a story, because everyone needs to be included and you need to know who said what.
6) When starting a new paragraph a reporter should not start the paragraph when asked, because we already know you asked them a question you don't need to tell us again.
7) An attributions should start at the beginning of the sentence when you want to start with person said instead of said person.
8) An attribution should start at the end of the sentence when you want to end with said person not person said.
9) An attribution should appear in the middle of a sentence when you want to combine two different quotes from the same person.
10) You should you use tone words for verbs for an attribution in a news story.
11) The tense you should have in your attribution depends on what the interviewer says his or her quotes, how they feel.
12) Speakers should be identified on first reference with both first and last name.
13) Speakers should be identified on second reference by just there last name.
14) The rules for comma and period placement at the end of a direct quotation are that periods should be inside quotation.
15) The difference between a direct and indirect quote is that a direct quote has there quote word for word while an indirect quot has there quote paraphrased,
16) In an attribution tag the speaker comes first then the attribution word.
17) It is appropriate to put the attribution word before the speaker when all of this happens before the quote, not after.
18) " I'm proud of each and every person on this team." Said Coach Ed Hullender.
19) Junior Laura Duke, the only Wheeler High student to audition who is not currently on the dance team said, "Dancing in the Super Bowl will be a once in a lifetime opportunity."
20) Coach Steve Lattizori said," They're not real wrestlers, and i think it actually hurts the sport. I wish they would change there names from wrestling to acting."
21) Correct.
22) In correct because the attribution should have gone in front of the quote.
23) In correct because the attribution should have been in front of the quote that was given.
24) Correct.
25) In correct there should have been a period instead of a comma in the end quotation before the attribution.
26) In correct because there should have not been a coma after the quotation marks instead there should have been a period in the quotation marks.
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